tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post1777684132746029249..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: FLASH FICTION FRIDAY, CYCLE 101: IS ANYONE THERE?Joycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-70264465779976801322012-10-27T18:46:12.701-05:002012-10-27T18:46:12.701-05:00Oh, god.... I'm not sleeping tonight! That la...Oh, god.... I'm not sleeping tonight! That last paragraph was beautifully done!<br /><br />You might have just put me off spelunking, Joyce... haha!<br /><br />Wow... great story! I love how you let the suspense build in this wonderful morality play.<br /><br />Unlike the others... I don't want to know who... or what... 'Mother' is, thank you... my imagination is working overtime here!<br /><br />Dark, brutal horror.... doesn't get much better. Brava, Joyce!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13430872985988041256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-74268700622614769782012-10-27T00:02:50.404-05:002012-10-27T00:02:50.404-05:00Chilling. I like that I'm left wondering what ...Chilling. I like that I'm left wondering what 'Mother' is. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-19135585347798021092012-10-27T00:02:13.820-05:002012-10-27T00:02:13.820-05:00Chilling. I like that I'm left wondering what ...Chilling. I like that I'm left wondering what 'Mother' is. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-88034199020186481982012-10-27T00:01:12.367-05:002012-10-27T00:01:12.367-05:00Chilling. I like that I'm left wondering what ...Chilling. I like that I'm left wondering what 'Mother' is. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-84212586237925525522012-10-26T06:32:26.635-05:002012-10-26T06:32:26.635-05:00I liked the narrator's voice. That last paragr...I liked the narrator's voice. That last paragraph gave me chills. <br /><br />-JedAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08881867083577995811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-51965265573867220632012-10-26T04:35:49.072-05:002012-10-26T04:35:49.072-05:00Brutal horror, Joyce. Not at all what you would ex...Brutal horror, Joyce. Not at all what you would expect from a stereotypical grandmother! Suspenseful and well written.Lewis Petershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07977006391190429073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-17690348442695018242012-10-25T12:18:50.579-05:002012-10-25T12:18:50.579-05:00Nice description. Markham comes across as a sort o...Nice description. Markham comes across as a sort of nice guy, a little arrogant, but not used to being thwarted. Possibly this would have taught him a lesson if he'd just been trapped for a few days, but we'll never know. Good build up of horror at the end. Didn't miss him very much after all. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com