tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post1870010503677680898..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: FLASH FICTION FRIDAY, CYCLE 92: BLAME IT ON THE MOONJoycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-38602568395271050052012-08-18T13:03:53.963-05:002012-08-18T13:03:53.963-05:00Good show. Reminds me of my favorite reruns from t...Good show. Reminds me of my favorite reruns from the '50s like the Twilight Zone and The Outer Limits<br />Zack Baerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08339668413191183397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-46545884345198811392012-08-17T03:17:33.046-05:002012-08-17T03:17:33.046-05:00Nicely done!
Gerald sounds like my creepy neighb...Nicely done! <br /><br />Gerald sounds like my creepy neighbor I based my last Flash Fiction story on.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-8720891690413471832012-08-17T01:18:37.017-05:002012-08-17T01:18:37.017-05:00Joyce this moves inexorably towards what is the on...Joyce this moves inexorably towards what is the only ending you could have chosen. Brilliantly tight and satisfying.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-19592481780704273132012-08-16T08:01:33.228-05:002012-08-16T08:01:33.228-05:00Hooray for creatures from Hell! ;) And good thing ...Hooray for creatures from Hell! ;) And good thing Ger doesn't have to worry about being bored anymore . . CMStewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14442510218067147705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-1490217997480502382012-08-15T23:24:44.684-05:002012-08-15T23:24:44.684-05:00Nice story - felt a moment of pity for poor little...Nice story - felt a moment of pity for poor little misunderstood Gerald, unloved, moved from town to town.<br />Then I got a grip and rejoiced in his downfall. Maybe Bobby used this creature for other kids too? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-58263501639796634422012-08-15T23:20:45.966-05:002012-08-15T23:20:45.966-05:00Poor little Gerald, unloved, moved from town to to...Poor little Gerald, unloved, moved from town to town. <br />Not!<br />Nice to see him get it at the end, by something conjured up by Bobby. Maybe something Bobby has used before? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-84382798140562788862012-08-15T22:25:57.638-05:002012-08-15T22:25:57.638-05:00I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. The idea ha...I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. The idea had been floating around in my head for awhile, but I was only able to get it down at the last minute.<br /><br />Don't you just love it when a bully gets it? This, however, was a lesson learned the really hard way though...Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-23391098372605777182012-08-15T21:49:07.457-05:002012-08-15T21:49:07.457-05:00Oh my! Joyce...what a story! I both enjoyed and re...Oh my! Joyce...what a story! I both enjoyed and recoiled at Gerald's comeuppance. Well done!Jenny Jenny Flanneryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07621715431584059448noreply@blogger.com