tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post1968088169419863871..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: FLASH FICTION FRIDAY, CYCLE 35: FIELD TRIPJoycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-36253409180741942642011-06-25T22:01:57.971-05:002011-06-25T22:01:57.971-05:00Kurt Vonnegut had a title that would have been per...Kurt Vonnegut had a title that would have been perfect for this one, Joyce. It was: "Welcome To The Monkey House." Nicely told tale with a great twist.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-18210966849506951282011-06-23T09:18:27.597-05:002011-06-23T09:18:27.597-05:00Great stuff again Joyce and the cast of characters...Great stuff again Joyce and the cast of characters was absolutely marvelous. Loved the ending too and can't wait to see what you put up for this week!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-44817712281016304772011-06-21T08:43:16.353-05:002011-06-21T08:43:16.353-05:00"....do-de-do-do, do-de-do-do...."
A re..."....do-de-do-do, do-de-do-do...." <br />A real 'Twilight Zone'-moment here, Joyce! <br /><br />Lovely twist at the end - I thought Daniel was going to wake up in his bed in a mental hospital and put it down to psychotic drugs....<br /><br />Well, done - another very fine offering :-)SueHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394307650434614637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-4386416110690311242011-06-18T12:35:14.070-05:002011-06-18T12:35:14.070-05:00Joyce, your story was gripping. I did not expect t...Joyce, your story was gripping. I did not expect the ending, it was perfect. I might be starting flash fiction friday, and was just reading some of the stories. I loved this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-91406618889586398692011-06-18T02:39:40.983-05:002011-06-18T02:39:40.983-05:00OMG!!! I just had the same thought as Beach... t...OMG!!! I just had the same thought as Beach... this "Outer Limits" vibe...<br /><br />"I began to pray to a God I’d never felt the need to acknowledge before." I got a shiver...<br /><br />Smashing read!! I love how you build the suspense... lead us down one path... and then... the twist... the "turn" in to the darkness! Traded as pet breeding stock for technology!! OMG!! Certainly did not see that coming! <br /><br />As I read more and more... I had a thought that maybe the trip would turn out to be some sort of psychological test for the young students.. but, you did say you like "dark"... :)<br /><br />Excellent story... as always! You make my Fridays something to really look forward to, Joyce!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13430872985988041256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-13921775592517306032011-06-17T19:02:08.698-05:002011-06-17T19:02:08.698-05:00Whoa! I did not see that coming! What a deliciou...Whoa! I did not see that coming! What a deliciously disturbing ending to this tale. Of course you know I will want to check in with the field trip group in another five years to see how they are faring...Barbara Bruederlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14476249934930666695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-20616463370158654092011-06-17T05:47:51.295-05:002011-06-17T05:47:51.295-05:00A fate worse than than death? except for the breed...A fate worse than than death? except for the breeding bit :-) great work - I enjoyed thatGlenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11562111165943505509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-76648013908083694522011-06-16T17:15:31.760-05:002011-06-16T17:15:31.760-05:00Great story! It had an "Outer Limits" fe...Great story! It had an "Outer Limits" feel complete with that ah crap moment when things go bad for the characters.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.com