tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post3016077171031846276..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: Flash Fiction Friday, Week 41: In Plain SightJoycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-47132113927897024832016-06-11T11:19:58.197-05:002016-06-11T11:19:58.197-05:00Thanks for your comments, Evan. I'm glad you e...Thanks for your comments, Evan. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Anyone who is willing to hide in plain sight and try to wait out any consequences of their actions obviously would have no intention of bearing responsibility for them. This was kind of a suicide by cop, by peers, or a bit of both.<br /><br />This was considerably longer when I first drafted it and it was very tough trimming it down. Maybe after I complete my serialized flash piece from weeks ago, I might come back and give this one another go. Who knows...Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-87861364688031460472016-06-09T21:50:33.159-05:002016-06-09T21:50:33.159-05:00A bit of a combo detective-western story! Very nic...A bit of a combo detective-western story! Very nice, Joyce. There was, unfortunately, no way it was going to have a happy ending. As you allude to at the end, fear of capital punishment can make people desperate. The cycle of violence doesn't leave much room for reason. I'd love to read a more fleshed-out version of this one!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06853187534283890425noreply@blogger.com