tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post3307879597450133874..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: Flash Fiction Friday, Week 8: The InvitationJoycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-77318824337191892312015-10-27T20:14:10.492-05:002015-10-27T20:14:10.492-05:00Thanks, Rose. Glad you like it. Nummers for sure!Thanks, Rose. Glad you like it. Nummers for sure!Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-89219291671557852032015-10-27T20:12:34.118-05:002015-10-27T20:12:34.118-05:00Thanks much, Beach. If something seems too good to...Thanks much, Beach. If something seems too good to be true, it probably is. A lesson Annie learned just a tad too late. Of course, she'ls got a bit of time to mull that over while she's eating double desserts!<br /><br />Your idea about the hotel sounds very interesting. I like stories about places that have an air about them you can't explain. All you know is you have to get away as quickly as possible. But, what if you can't...Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-29100206732676284372015-10-27T20:07:19.832-05:002015-10-27T20:07:19.832-05:00Thanks, Mike. Her hosts certainly did their homewo...Thanks, Mike. Her hosts certainly did their homework on their 'guest', didn't they? If she had been the least bit ethical, their dinner party would have been catered by Domino's. Oh, the horror!Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-40070731574797768552015-10-26T02:07:47.904-05:002015-10-26T02:07:47.904-05:00Got to admit your story has me now playing with a ...Got to admit your story has me now playing with a similar idea of confinement. The story will be set in Orlando at a hotel my family and I stayed at for about two hours before the creepiness had us up and leave for home.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-22130072973217619352015-10-24T05:33:18.533-05:002015-10-24T05:33:18.533-05:00Great story with a delicious twist!Great story with a delicious twist!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08943912185707278625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-71133803760159987392015-10-23T00:48:17.354-05:002015-10-23T00:48:17.354-05:00Proves the point that anyone claiming they want to...Proves the point that anyone claiming they want to give you money should met with extreme skepticism. Great story! I loved it. The idea of being confined in a place for the purpose of being fattened up sent chills down my spine. Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-42128629982080829462015-10-22T12:57:21.540-05:002015-10-22T12:57:21.540-05:00Oh, yummy, dinner. Nice story, with good developme...Oh, yummy, dinner. Nice story, with good development of Annie. We just know she'll break that promise. Her hosts knew too - good choice by them.<br />I like that addressing/undressing line too. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com