tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post4796875119478962131..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: FLASH FICTION FRIDAY, CYCLE 70, LOST IN TIME: THE PROMISEJoycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-24722847699490286112012-03-11T09:35:15.463-05:002012-03-11T09:35:15.463-05:00Veronica, So glad you liked my little trip through...Veronica, So glad you liked my little trip through time. I believe we all wished Phil a quick journey VERY early on--somewhere, anywhere... Knowing he has so much to offer, hopefully, the T-Rexs and their buddies will appreciate all Phil has to give! Hopefully, Ronald and Jeanine can make it work this 'time' around. Thanks again very much. I always appreciate your comments.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-62120180113431835532012-03-10T18:13:14.863-06:002012-03-10T18:13:14.863-06:00A taut little psychological thriller... wonderful ...A taut little psychological thriller... wonderful take on the concept of time travel.<br /><br />I love how you build the suspense here, and even though we wish, earlier on, for Phil to get his 'comeuppance', the manner in which he does (and where) is still a delicious little thrill at the end.<br /><br />You had me hoping that this time around, things turn out better for Ronald and Jeannine.<br /><br />Great story-telling, Joyce! It is always a thrill reading your stories!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13430872985988041256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-9528198323403835262012-03-08T19:44:27.771-06:002012-03-08T19:44:27.771-06:00CM, Thanks for stopping by and commenting. So gla...CM, Thanks for stopping by and commenting. So glad you enjoyed my little tale. One has to wonder about Ronald and Jeanine. With his return, will her future change? Sure hope so. Maybe since he erased his return coordinates, might he be planning to take them both away to some other time? That certainly would be cool. Now, Phil? We all know just how much he has to offer...lolJoycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-739995489242350652012-03-08T19:41:29.038-06:002012-03-08T19:41:29.038-06:00Ingrid, I'm with you. If 'this' worke...Ingrid, I'm with you. If 'this' worked when I went back yesterday, what if I went back today and changed 'that' and... It would be hard to just sit tight and live in the present! Like I said before, the character of Phil was based on REAL people I know that need to be sent to play with T-Rex's. I'd be willing to go back briefly just to watch them enjoying their games...Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-75191770867523342002012-03-08T19:04:40.530-06:002012-03-08T19:04:40.530-06:00"Ooops..." Ha. I'm rather glad I ca..."Ooops..." Ha. I'm rather glad I can't go back to change anything. It might be like chocolate - once is never enough. I can, however, think of several candidates to send playing with T-Rex...Ingrid KV Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01357668181484669053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-40357802836089382372012-03-08T18:29:05.123-06:002012-03-08T18:29:05.123-06:00Great story! :) Really liked the flow and the psyc...Great story! :) Really liked the flow and the psychology. I also like the mystery at the end. What will become of Ronald and Jeanine? Will Phil make friends with a T. Rex? lolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-7434706584964964492012-03-08T09:26:39.081-06:002012-03-08T09:26:39.081-06:00Beach, Thanks for your comments and I'm glad y...Beach, Thanks for your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed this. I have to admit also that there are a number of events I'd love to go back and change, knowing what I know now. But I have to wonder just how many things would actually be affected if I did; more than just that one event, I'm sure. Will Ronald's return change Jeanine's future? Who can say. It certainly will change Ronald's. Maybe they both can wander through time together. And Phil? That character was created based on several people I know that I would just love sending back in time to socialize with some T-Rex's!Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-65790584242760222722012-03-08T01:38:43.832-06:002012-03-08T01:38:43.832-06:00Nicely done. I've got to admit there are sever...Nicely done. I've got to admit there are several periods in my life I would like to go back and visit and your story got me thinking of them. I have to wonder about the ultimate fate of Ronald and Jeanine. Was Jeanine's apparent death just a cover up for Ronald and her disappearing into time and space. As for Phil, I know many people like him I would happily send off to another time period.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.com