tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post5431028621183108028..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: FLASH FICTION FRIDAY, CYCLE 94: LOVE AND DIAMONDSJoycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-61590967101868202542012-08-30T14:17:57.542-05:002012-08-30T14:17:57.542-05:00An open-ended story. Will William be a good dad? W...An open-ended story. Will William be a good dad? Will Sandy accept his love? I'm intrigued!<br /><br />CMStewartAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-32685141740361356412012-08-30T08:29:23.020-05:002012-08-30T08:29:23.020-05:00Great detail - I really felt like I was in those m...Great detail - I really felt like I was in those motel rooms! And I love the repeat of the clean clothes and shiny hair - really gives the story a focus. (Sorry if this comment is repeated - I couldn't get it to work!)franceshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03601897537572002554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-10269817206734363772012-08-30T08:27:03.327-05:002012-08-30T08:27:03.327-05:00Great detailing - I felt I was in those motel room...Great detailing - I felt I was in those motel rooms! Love the clean clothes and shiny hair bits - they really give the story a strong focus.franceshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03601897537572002554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-14828136962129934492012-08-30T01:19:15.009-05:002012-08-30T01:19:15.009-05:00Well imagined and written piece. You see the end ...Well imagined and written piece. You see the end coming but you still want to know how you get there!Lewis Petershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07977006391190429073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-59701188548396195412012-08-30T01:04:54.619-05:002012-08-30T01:04:54.619-05:00Damn! Tragic but with a hopeful ending.
You choke...Damn! Tragic but with a hopeful ending.<br /><br />You choked me up. <br /><br />Great writing. Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-53020849807908255032012-08-29T22:42:57.879-05:002012-08-29T22:42:57.879-05:00Poor thing, definitely a hard life. Pretty low sel...Poor thing, definitely a hard life. Pretty low self-esteem, and seemed to be just going through the motions as far as living goes. Nice upbeat at the end. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com