tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post5897634167936064441..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: Flash Fiction Friday, Week 6 - Head StartJoycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-21976104317866360392019-02-13T23:29:53.022-06:002019-02-13T23:29:53.022-06:00Thanks so much, Mike. I'm glad you enjoyed thi...Thanks so much, Mike. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Sometimes, it pays to listen to the worry wart in the family. I like Connie and Norb, and I hope that somehow they got out of this situation in one piece!Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-31383946395660840702019-02-13T12:16:35.958-06:002019-02-13T12:16:35.958-06:00Oh, I loved this. Wary brother, and an overconfide...Oh, I loved this. Wary brother, and an overconfident one. Such a solid plan, then several hints it may not work that well here. And that last line - two beeps on the horn! Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04631797915121524407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-15026298387281599692019-02-11T11:55:09.624-06:002019-02-11T11:55:09.624-06:00Thanks, Ginger. Connie and Norb most likely have q...Thanks, Ginger. Connie and Norb most likely have quite a few tales to tell before this incident, and hopefully, after too! This really was a lot of fun to write.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-68071528153204960582019-02-11T08:14:54.043-06:002019-02-11T08:14:54.043-06:00I really wanted there to be more to read of this s...I really wanted there to be more to read of this story. I loved the wariness of the one brother about the plan at the beginning. Great foreshadowing! Then their plans just fell apart and there was no way to tell his brother about the problems. Gingerhttp://writetothelimit.comnoreply@blogger.com