tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post6821635319034011780..comments2023-11-14T21:31:35.805-06:00Comments on J.F. Juzwik's Blog: Flash Fiction Friday, Week 16: The Last Train?Joycehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-28103046554142657842015-12-23T10:27:12.279-06:002015-12-23T10:27:12.279-06:00Thanks much, Mike. Such a positive outcome from a ...Thanks much, Mike. Such a positive outcome from a chance meeting and a little conversation. The stars certainly were in alignment that day for them both. Hopefully, they hung on to each other and were long gone by the time the train came along!Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-27991005534936505892015-12-22T14:09:11.679-06:002015-12-22T14:09:11.679-06:00Nicely written. And a happy ending as they realize...Nicely written. And a happy ending as they realized they had something to offer each other. That bit at the end about it being slippery had me worried for a bit though, in case they slipped in front of the train after all. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-56406385930992143262015-12-20T12:34:31.138-06:002015-12-20T12:34:31.138-06:00Thanks so much, Rose. Both coming from different d...Thanks so much, Rose. Both coming from different directions, yet converge at the same junction. They both needed to talk and to learn to listen. Sometimes, that's all we need.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497164028438533435.post-14467469709684225192015-12-19T06:26:30.750-06:002015-12-19T06:26:30.750-06:00Wow! That actually brought tears to my eyes. Such ...Wow! That actually brought tears to my eyes. Such a sweet conversation. I'm glad they've both found someone to talk to.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08943912185707278625noreply@blogger.com