The prompt this week was as follows:
‘You’ve met someone you’re crazy about, but he/she sees you as
nothing more than an acquaintance. You mention your crush to a friend, who
tells you there’s a simple solution to your problem. All it would take is one
visit to the old woman who lives at the north end of town. Tell her what you
want, she’ll cast a spell, and your wish for love will come true. Your friend
used her ‘services’ and the spell worked perfectly.
You’re not a believer in all that hocus pocus nonsense, but
decide to give it a try anyway. After all, what can it hurt?’
The prompt was to write a story about casting a love spell, and
the genre was horror.
Patience really is a virtue; although, some folks learn that the hard way.
All in Good
Time…
“Cass, I’m so glad you were able to get away for lunch today so
we could talk. I really need some advice. I’ll try not to keep you too long so you
won’t get in trouble. I know you only have a half hour.”
“Deb, I’m a District Manager now. I don’t have to punch a
timeclock anymore.”
“That’s right, I forgot. I don’t think I ever congratulated you
on your promotion. You deserved it though. It took them way too long to replace
that clown that used to be your boss. What did they do with him? Is he a Vice
President now?”
“Didn’t I tell you? One morning, he got up from his desk, walked
out, and no one has seen or heard from him since.”
“That’s weird, Cass. Was the job just too much for him?”
“Oh no, Deb. If I told you what I did, you’d never believe me.”
“Cass, my God, you didn’t sleep…”
“With one of the VP’s? No way, Deb. I love my husband way too
much to do anything like that. Remind me to tell you how easy it was to make
all that happen. Enough about me though. Tell me about your problem.”
“Well, this new guy started in the Sales Department a couple of
months ago, and I’ve been throwing myself at him since day one. He’s nice and
smart and charming, but no matter what I do, he just looks right past me.”
“Why don’t you ask him out for a drink?”
“I have, Cass, and he always says that would be great, and then
invites the rest of the department to meet up at McGill’s. It’s like we’re
buddies and I’m just one of the guys.”
“Are you sure he doesn’t already have a girlfriend?”
“I know he doesn’t because after he’d been there a week, he
asked Sarah, who works the switchboard, to go out that Friday night. I know
they’ve gone out every week since then because on Monday mornings, we all hear
about it from her. She and I are the same age, and I’m a hundred times prettier
than she ever could be. I know I sound like a petty jealous bitch, Cass, but
just once, why can’t I get the nice guy?”
“Deb, I can help you. Do you know where Monmouth Road is?”
“Monmouth Road? Sure. It’s that road off Highway 12 that leads
into Cooper’s Woods. But, how does that…”
“At the end of Monmouth, there’s a house. An old woman lives
there with her son. Deb, I promise you, she’s got powers. I paid her to put a
spell on my boss to make him walk out and disappear, and then on the same day,
I would get his job. I wasn’t even up for that position, but you see how it
turned out.”
“Cass, you did say ‘a spell’?”
“That’s exactly what I said. You give this woman fifty dollars
and tell her what you want. It’s spooky, but she’ll already know most of it
before you even say a word. When the stars align, or some crap like that, she’ll
cast a spell, and you’ll have what you want. One visit is all it takes. Go between
10pm and midnight. Deb, her spells really work. She was recommended to me by
some people I work with. You have no idea what she has done for them. It’s all
real. I promise you.”
Cass and I have been friends since first grade and she’s always
been the level-headed one. She’s never said or done anything to make me not
trust her. But, a woman with the power to put spells on people? Well, what I’ve
been doing isn’t working at all. What can it hurt?
***
I got there around 10:15, and only the front porch light was on.
I knocked on the door. A man answered – the old lady’s son, I assumed, and he told
me to go into the first room on the right. The room was dimly lit, and an old
woman sat at one end of a couch. She motioned for me to sit down at the other
end.
“What is it you need?” she asked.
“There’s a man that I want to like me.”
Wait. Like? No way. If there’s going to be some magic done here,
I might as well go all the way.
“I take that back. I want him to love me. He’s…”
“I know of whom you speak. He works where you do and his name is
Todd. You have tried unsuccessfully for some time to attract this man, but he
sees you only as an acquaintance.”
How…? Of course. Cass. She got to her and told her all about him.
But, I never told Cass his name.
“Yes,” I said. “I need a spell to make him love only me forever.”
“Of course,” she responded. “You will place your donation in the
box on the table by the front door and leave. Before long, you will have the
love you desire.”
Donation? So, that’s what it’s called. Well, I can’t be any worse
off than I was before, so what the Hell?
***
This was too much. Thanks a lot, my dearest friend. You had me believing
there was something to all this hocus pocus. Just be patient, you said. The old
woman will make it all right, you said. It’s been almost a month and nothing
has changed even a little bit. Well, I hope you all had a good laugh at my
expense. One more visit to that old hag was definitely in the cards.
This time, I didn’t bother to knock. I found her in that same
room on that same couch, only this time, she was waving what looked like dead
flowers in the air and mumbling something I couldn’t understand. I wondered for
whose benefit this show was being put on.
“You phony old crow. You and my good friend had me convinced
this spell crap was for real. You know what happened at work this morning? Todd
announced his engagement to Sarah, the little tramp who answers our office
phones. He’s known her for less than three months. You can take your spells
and…”
“He will forsake the other. I am now saying the words, and
tomorrow, he will love only you. The time had to be right to say…”
“I’m done being played for a fool. I’m taking my money back.”
“Careful child,” she said, pointing a shriveled finger in my
direction. “Do not disrespect my powers or you will…”
I don’t know what came over me, but I slapped her as hard as I
could. She fell onto the floor and began making the most horrible sounds. I hoped
I didn’t seriously injure her. This whole situation has turned me into a
monster.
“I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to do that.” I felt sick. “It’s
just that I’m so upset and…”
I reached down to help her back up onto the couch, but something
was very wrong. What was happening? I was filled with a deep pain. My face felt
as if it was going to explode. I put my hands on my face and its shape was
changing. Hands? What am I saying? They were turning into claws, as were my
feet, and were covered with fur. I ran to the mirror I had seen by the front
door. My God. My ears were large, my eyes were turning into small slits, and I
had the elongated snout of an animal. My arms and legs were also now covered
with fur, and were becoming longer and very muscular.
“What are you doing to me?” I could barely get the words out.
“You will find love now,” she said. “The only love you deserve.
The love of such as yourself. The love of the beast. Be gone.”
“I’m sorry. I didn’t mean…please don’t do this…please…I…”
Her son came at me swinging a baseball bat, yelling at me to get
out and never come back. I tried to run, but I could feel myself being pulled
down to all fours. The pain was very strong now. I could feel my teeth, and the
talons on my hands and feet, growing longer and sharper. A tail now swung
behind me. The transformation was complete. I had become a hideous creature,
cursed to live out my life in the woods, killing what I could find to survive.
I could still think and I could still reason, and I will always
remember who, and what, I had been, and what I have now become and will forever
remain. I ran and ran deeper into the woods, howling from the pain. No matter
how far I got from the old woman’s house, I could still hear her and her son
laughing. I know I always will.
I’m so sorry. Truly. Sorry. God, please help me…
A nice twist to the standard love potion story. But I do wonder if maybe once she adjusted she found love at last.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mike. I had fun twisting this one around. I hope once it's all said and done that she can find love somehow. Perhaps with another cursed one? Who can say...
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