This week, we’re touring the Night Gallery. The prompt was
to select one of the displayed paintings and base our story on the image. The
genre was supernatural horror. The one I selected is shown below, and I hope my
story captures the true horror it offers.
The Role of a
Lifetime
I’m an idiot, and soon, I’ll be a dead idiot. This is what I
get for trusting my so-called best friend and my so-called best wife. If they
wanted to get rid of me, there are more humane methods. I’m probably partly
responsible for the elaborate ruse they concocted to lure me to this island
though. I am, if nothing else, predictable.
I’m a hospital orderly, and deal with the dead. It’s not a
bad job and the money’s good. What I see all day long are white walls, white
gowns, white floors, and the occasional blue tint on the lips of those who have
passed on. As stimulating as this all sounds, it’s boring. That is why I seek
my adventure in role playing activities.
I’m not talking about video games; although on occasion, I
may dabble. What I love to do is role play as a re-enactor. I’m sure you’ve
heard of those who re-enact the Civil War, or some other event from history. It’s
great fun and very exciting. You get to dress up in period costumes and speak
the language of the time, and all the while tourists mill around you, take your
picture, and ask what your part was during the event.
My wife, Madge, thinks it’s a foolish waste of time and money,
but as long as I’m able to send her to Florida every few months, she doesn’t
complain too strenuously. To my surprise, she encouraged me to participate this
time. Madge said Emery had told her of an event coming up, and she and Emery
knew this would be an experience I would never forget. She was right as rain about
that one.
“Dale,” Emery had approached me in the break room yesterday
morning. “I’ve got a surprise for you. I’ve made all the arrangements. I spoke
with Madge and she said you had no plans for this weekend while she’s off to
Miami. There’s an island most have never heard of, that’s a couple of hours off
the coast. Every month, they re-enact when an English sea captain was
shipwrecked there and ended up bringing prosperity to their people when his
countrymen rescued him. I don’t remember the whole story, but you’ll love it.
During this month’s re-enactment, you will be their star performer.
“I have a friend who’ll fly you there in his private plane
and drop you off on one of the beaches. You’ll make your way to the center of
the island, find their village, and pretend to be shipwrecked. They’ll be
cautious, but you’ll convince them you are a friend, and blah, blah, blah. There’s
no script for this – you’ll just wing it. All the while, tourists will be watching
from seats on a hillside. You’ll love it.”
I have to admit, the circumstances sounded rather unusual,
but who knows? I’d be the headliner of this particular show, and that sat right
with me. I couldn’t find that island on any map and wondered how Emery knew
about this re-enactment activity. I made a mental note to ask him about that
later. Madge took a taxi to the airport and Emery drove me to his friend’s
airstrip. He had even brought a costume for me to change into before the flight,
such that an English sea captain from a couple hundred years ago might have
worn. Such a considerate bastard.
We took off right away, and during the flight, Emery’s
friend informed me that I would have to jump from the plane onto the shore.
After almost three hours, I saw the island and we flew in very low. The pilot
opened a door on the side, lowered a ladder and told me to get out. He got as
close as he could to the shore and told me to jump or he’d push me. At the
time, I supposed it was better than being tossed overboard from a power boat.
I was grateful I didn’t sprain my ankle when I hit the
ground. I ran into the water briefly so I would look to the tourists as if I’d
crawled out of the ocean onto the shore after my ship sank. They love it when
you keep it as realistic as possible. I didn’t see anywhere tourists could be observing
from, and I figured maybe cameras were set up in some of the trees to capture
it all. I made my way through the jungle trying to get to the village. Along
the way, I practiced my British accent. I’d become quite adept at accents since
my first re-enact event. I wondered what accent the natives would be using.
About a half hour in, I came to the edge of the village. I
still saw no tourist seating. They keep them hidden from the action well. Some
natives were cooking over a fire and others were weaving vines. How quaint. I
ran into the center of it all and collapsed in front of the fire.
“Thank goodness I’ve found you,” I said, using my most
royal-sounding dialect. “My ship sank, and all my crew lost. My Queen will send
a ship after me and you receive a great reward for assisting me.”
Several of them ran over to me, pushed me to the ground and
began kicking me. Emery said they would be cautious, not physically abusive.
When do I get to explain that I’ve come in peace? They pulled me to my feet and
dragged me to the front of the largest hut. A man I perceived to be the Chief
came out. He really looked authentic with the great costume and all that
makeup. His English was good though with not much of an accent. I guess some aren’t
as into living their roles as I was.
“Another intruder,” he shouted. “Our homes will not be
defiled by the unholy. Others have trespassed on our sacred land, and you will
join them in the Cave of the Dark One. He will enter your soul and rid you of
your evil and you will know his name forever.”
“No, wait,” I begged. They were twisting my arms painfully behind
me. “I’m the shipwrecked captain. You’re supposed to save me. I…”
Leaves were stuffed into my mouth. They dragged me away from
the village to the opening of a cave. A huge rock blocked it. Several of the
natives moved it to the side and they pushed me in and quickly rolled the rock
back. This was too much. I yelled for them to let me out, but the rock never
moved. Something was very wrong. I was injured, and had scratches all over from
being dragged. Emery and Madge wouldn’t have tricked me into coming here, would they? Is it
possible this was really happening? Oh God.
The Chief said there had been others, and I can see several
of them now. Mother of God, what happened to them? They’re no longer human, not
in the sense that I still am. They are shaped as they were in life – a head,
two arms, torso, two legs – the same, except they are no longer covered with
skin. They are covered with a transparent shell, inside which fire burns. Their
eyes are black hollows and their mouths locked forever in a silent scream. Please.
Please don’t let them touch me. This wasn’t my idea. I never meant to desecrate
your homes. If you let me go, I won’t come back. Plea…
What is that? There is a black mist making its way toward
me. There is no wind here and yet, it is as if it is being driven by some force
in my direction. This vile air is reshaping itself into a snake as it
approaches. God, the smell. I am familiar with the scent of death and this goes
far beyond. I stop screaming and close my mouth so I don’t taste the odor, but
the mist comes over me and fills my nostrils. The pain is unbearable. I open my
mouth to scream and it pushes its way in.
I back away against a wall and can go no further. I try to
push it away, but my hands simply move through it. I can feel it making its way
down my throat. How can this be? I can feel small fingers with sharp nails within
this cloud of air grasping and pulling it through my mouth, down my throat, and
into my body. It has become dark and I can no longer see. The flames have begun
to consume me from the inside. I have become like the others.
This is my punishment. This is my Hell. I can no longer
reason. I can only feel. The pain. The burning. Everywhere. Why? I’m not evil.
I didn’t know. It was Emery and it was Madge. It wasn’t me. I was set up.
Please listen. I’m sorry. So sorry. Merciful God, why…
Great build up of tension. How did Emery know about the island? And who are the other people in the cave? Very intriguing story - thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rose. Glad you enjoyed it. As far as how Emery knew, when you want someone to disappear, you do your research, and Emery did his well. The others? Most likely folks sent on bogus tours, etc. to get them out of the picture or foolish tourists who didn't do their research. Word gets around and a quick trip to this island paradise does the trick!
DeletePoor Emery. He lived his days with the dead, and now he's condemned to be neither alive nor dead. I like the way this builds from what seems to be just a prank, to a nightmare.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mike. That's what I was aiming for. Simply a friend having a laugh at his expense? Not even close. All he ever wanted to do was 'be' someone else for a little while. Should have stuck with the Civil War.
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