My story is about a signal received from another world.
S.O.S.
2135, 23 MAR
1600 H……….MISSION #UAC-4496R……….OBJECTIVE: INVESTIGATE
SIGNAL/REPORT/RESCUE(?)……….MICHAEL JOSEPH O’HALLOREN, COMMANDER; CREW: RICHARD
JAMES COOPER, COMMAND MODULE PILOT; RONALD ANTHONY JORDAN, MISSION SPECIALIST;
GEORGE FRANKLIN SANDERSON, MISSION SPECIALIST; JONATHAN MARK WINSTON, MISSION
SPECIALIST; SAMUEL TIMOTHY CAULDER, PAYLOAD SPECIALIST; BRAIN MITCHELL DAVIS,
PAYLOAD SPECIALIST……….mjoEND TRANS
2135, 23 MAR 1615
H……….Signal
received from beyond Black Arc……….Origin: Location #QR94xxxB9……….Atmosphere
compatible with Earth……….S.O.S/no clarification……….System confirms 10 identical
signals received past 10 years/Frequency: Annual/Earth time measurement……….Shuttles
dispatched……….No shuttles retrieved/all crew classified MIA……….No reports or data
available/corrupted?..........No rescue(s) of inhabitants documented……….Further access denied..........Will proceed
with caution following arrival……….mjoENDTRANS
2135, 16 DEC 2100
H……….Touchdown
achieved……….Instrumentation reveals no immediate danger……….Unable to seek
origin of signal due to zero visibility……….Planet has 48 hours (Earth time measurement)
of day from its sun and 48 hours (Earth time measurement) of night……….Instruments
show we are mid-way through night cycle……….Were advised by Mission Control to begin
search for possible distress immediately on arrival……….My orders were to
dispatch entire crew……….I take full responsibility for disobeying said order……….I
will not leave shuttle unattended or place entire crew in jeopardy……….Ronny and
Sam will initiate search/both fully armed and are to remain together……….Report back
within 2 hours……….mjoENDTRANS
2135, 16 DEC 2245
H……….Communication
received from Ronny……….They were met by Ardisians (inhabitants of this planet)……….They
were advised S.O.S. sent in error……….No danger present……….I advised their
immediate return……….Contacted Mission Control to request further orders……….mjoENDTRANS
2135, 17 DEC 0800
H……….No
response from Mission Control……….Ronny and Sam have not returned……….Unable to
reach them……….Unsure how to proceed……….Plan is to wait for daylight……….Noises
outside/did not investigate due zero visibility……….Shuttle on total lockdown……….mjoENDTRANS
2135, 17 DEC 2115
H……….Still
no response from Mission Control……….Still no response from Ronny or Sam……….Day
cycle has begun, but light dim……….Limited visibility..........George and Brian
investigated area around Shuttle and reported damage to hull, landing gear doors, and
landing gear……….Jonny will assess damage/attempt to determine
cause/evaluate feasibility of repairs……….mjoENDTRANS
2135, 17 DEC 2400
H……….Still
unable to contact Ronny or Sam……..No response from Mission Control……….No contact with Ardisians……….George and Brian dispatched on search for Ronny and
Sam and/or Ardisian representative……….Advised both must report status within 2
hours……….Jonny cannot determine cause of damage/damage is extensive/repairs
will be time-intensive and difficult without stronger light source……….I have
requested immediate response and assistance from Mission Control……….Used Code
Override CX5957……….I take full responsibility for violation of protocol, but I
advised we are in distress and in need of immediate assistance……….Crew members
missing and unable to be reached……….mjoENDTRANS
2135, 18 DEC
0300 H……….George and Brian have not returned and I have received no
communication from them……….Still unable to contact Ronny or Sam……….No response
from Mission Control……….I fear for the safety of my crew and the security of
our craft……….I do not understand lack of response from Mission Control……….I do not
believe initial communication was from Ronny……….No data on Ardisians
available……….Still cannot retrieve data from previous missions……….Doubts about purpose
of this mission……….mjoENDTRANS
2135, 18 DEC
0600 H…….…Not much time……….Mission Control confirmed our purpose……….Ardisians
hold annual event/death matches……….Ardisians possess powerful
weapons……….Guarantee safety of planet Earth if Earth provides seven human fighters per year……….Entrances sealed/not holding……….Seal
has been broken…….…Hull has been breached…….…They are close……….We can hear them……….Richie, Jonny and I will use our
sidearms now……….On ourselves……….We have all been betrayed by our own kind..........We are not the first..........But we will be the last..........mjoEND TRANS
Great build up to a 'killer' ending. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks much, Rose. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Writing the ending just the right way was tough, but I'm glad it all worked out. It was fun writing in a unique type of format.
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