The prompt this week was to write a story set in the old West
and to include the following words: Gunfire, territories, blacksmith, ranch,
and stampede. My story is about a Sheriff who believes in righting a wrong, no
matter how long it takes.
In Plain Sight
Moving from our comfortable home and my comfortable job in the
East, out to the territories was my wife’s idea. She’s always been the
adventurous one. Her lady friends were all content to be married to a man who
came home for supper each evening. Not my wife, Mary, though. Don’t
misunderstand me; we’re the happiest couple I know, but she never wanted me to
do what she considered ordinary work. I was already Sheriff of our small town
when we met, and I was prepared to give that up after our wedding since most
women are full of fear for their men when they’re the law. My wife told me if I
quit, she’d quit me. It’s important to keep folks safe, she said. I’m proud of
my husband for keeping the peace, she said. You know, I’m proud of her for
that.
So our wedding came and went, and I stayed on as Sheriff of our little
town. Lots of folks traveling out West these days to look for bigger and better.
Nice folks mostly, but there’s some bad ones too, which is why Mary said we
need to go out there too. Right now, she said, they need more lawmen, so we
packed up and headed West. We’re starting life over here in a little town
that’s close to Ridge Rock Mountain – a little piece of Heaven on Earth. This
town’s still building up and needed someone to keep it in line, so I presented
myself to the Mayor. He, in turn, presented me with a badge.
The wife and I are doing well. We have a house just outside of
town. She enjoys planting her vegetables and flowers, and I enjoy my walks
through town, checking on folks and their businesses, and making sure our town
drunk gets tucked safely in at night in my jail. It’s a good life, but I will
always have one big regret: A killer I didn’t catch. Not long before we left
the East, our town’s bank was robbed. It normally didn’t hold a lot of cash
because the town was small, and the bank didn’t handle any large payrolls. This
time, though, the owner of a big ranch out West was finalizing the sale of a
large piece of land and several hundred heads of cattle. He planned to deposit
the money in banks along the way as he traveled back home. Word spreads like
wildfire these days and two men decided they would help themselves to this man’s
fortune.
I had already closed up the office and gone home. I was almost
asleep when I heard gunfire from the direction of town. I got there in time to
see two men on horseback with sacks of money hanging from their saddles. When I
fired, they turned around, and I got a clear look at both of them. One fired
back and hit me in the shoulder. Before I passed out, I saw Davy Michals, the
bank’s night guard, lying dead in the street. He still had rope tied around one
hand. They had broken in, tied Davy up, took the money, and were on their way
out when Davy got loose and tried to stop them.
The bank had no big safe like most, so all that cash had been
locked up in the Manager’s office. How did they know it was there? They were
never caught and the money was never found, but I never forgot their faces. One
was clean shaven and had dark hair and the other had light hair and a big scar
across his left cheek. Davy was a good man with a wife and a young son. He
deserved justice, and the man who killed him deserved to hang.
We’ve got excitement coming since a big cattle drive is camped
outside of town. Cowboys will be heading in to drink. They usually don’t bring a
lot of trouble. They’re around for a night or two, and most of them stay out at
their camp. The saloon and stores welcome their business. It brings a bit of
money into town and that’s always a good thing. I was coming out of Rosie’s
after having lunch when I saw some of them riding in. I couldn’t believe my
eyes. The one at the back was the man who killed Davy 6 months ago. What was
he doing out here working as a cowboy, and what happened to the money he stole?
Too, where was his partner? I decided to get to know their foreman and treat
him to pie and coffee at Rosie’s.
The foreman told me a couple days’ ride back, there was a
stampede. When they had arrived in the town, the local blacksmith, whose name
was Jeremiah, and who had a big scar across his cheek, seemed to recognize one
of their riders whose name was Willie. Willie seemed bothered by the man, who
insisted they go somewhere to talk. Later that night, the herd got spooked and ran
off in the direction of the north end of town. The foreman told me they managed
to settle the cattle down, but not before they ran right through the blacksmith’s
house, destroying it, and his small crop. Jeremiah was found dead inside,
trampled to death.
He said Willie was still with them, and described him as having
dark hair and always being clean shaven. I said nothing because I knew exactly
which one Willie was and why Jeremiah had been killed. Splitting the money two
ways didn’t sit right with him. But where was the money, and why had one of
them been working as a blacksmith and the other as a cowboy? I needed to make
sure Willie got what he deserved, but not at the risk of having a herd of cattle
stampede through my home or my town. He was a killer who wouldn’t hesitate to use
any means to eliminate someone who could identify him, or arrest him. He hadn’t
seen me when he came into town, so right now, I was holding the winning hand.
But, where to go from here?
I found out over a second piece of Rosie’s pie when the foreman
told me Willie was a poor soul too. He told me Willie did all he could to go on
this particular drive since it would pass by Ridge Rock Mountain. Said his younger
brother had been killed in one of the big caves up there by some Indians and he
wanted to pay his respects. Some of the men offered to ride up there with him
since it was rough country, but Willie told them he had to go alone. It was his
duty to honor his kin. There have never been any Indians in that area. I knew exactly what I needed to do.
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“Hello, Willie, if that’s really the name your folks gave you.”
I stepped out of the shadows in the cave just as Willie walked
up to the entrance.
“What do you want, lawman? Can’t a man find some peace in these
parts?”
If only peace was what he was after.
“I found the satchels of money from the bank robbery that you
hid in here. That was real smart too. After the robbery, you kept on riding
until you found a good hiding place. Then the two of you separated, worked like
regular folks, and waited, hoping nobody would be looking for you after all
that time. So, what went wrong? Did your partner want his share too soon for
your liking? Is that why you used a herd of cattle to get him out of the way?”
“I know you, lawman. I put a bullet in you when I was leaving
the bank. I should’ve gone back and put in one more. Doesn’t matter now though.
This is as far as you get.”
He pulled his gun on me.
“Drop those satchels, Sheriff, and don’t reach for your gun
because you’ll be dead before those bags hit the ground.”
“No, you drop your gun because this is as far as you get,” his
foreman said, as the rest of the cowboys stepped out of the shadows behind me.
“We’re trying to make a living to feed our families, and all you
were after was money,” the foreman continued. “You killed a bank guard, shot
the Sheriff, and used my herd to kill your partner. You could have killed us
all.”
Willie appeared to be lowering his gun, then raised it up and
took aim at all of us. I lost count of all the shots that were fired in his
direction. I plan to make sure all that money gets back to the bank safe and
sound. Too bad Willie won’t be going back along with it. I guess the thought of
his neck at the end of a hangman’s noose didn’t appeal to him as much as it
appealed to me. Rest in peace, Davy, my friend. Rest in peace.
A bit of a combo detective-western story! Very nice, Joyce. There was, unfortunately, no way it was going to have a happy ending. As you allude to at the end, fear of capital punishment can make people desperate. The cycle of violence doesn't leave much room for reason. I'd love to read a more fleshed-out version of this one!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments, Evan. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Anyone who is willing to hide in plain sight and try to wait out any consequences of their actions obviously would have no intention of bearing responsibility for them. This was kind of a suicide by cop, by peers, or a bit of both.
DeleteThis was considerably longer when I first drafted it and it was very tough trimming it down. Maybe after I complete my serialized flash piece from weeks ago, I might come back and give this one another go. Who knows...