The prompt this week was called Rain. And More Rain. The topic
was rain, but more than expected. My characters got a lot more than they ever expected.
Rain, Rain, Go Away…
“It’s the end of the world…” Even though William Hudson was
74 years old, he could still shout with the best of them. His neighbors on both
sides of Northview Boulevard heard his warning. When he got to the corner, he
turned right to also share his apocalyptic vision with the residents on
Sheridan Drive. Walking around the subdivision was difficult considering his
age and declining health, but he believed it was his duty. He couldn’t explain
how he knew, but there was something in the air…
“He’s at it again, Roger.”
“I know, Louise, but what can we do? Ever since his wife
died, he’s gone off the deep end.”
“I have no doubt losing her took a toll on him, but this is
too much. He’s frightening all the children in the neighborhood with all this
end of the world nonsense. Last week, the days were too sunny, and the week
before, the nights were too dark. This week, we’ve been getting too much rain.”
“I know. Mitch and I stopped at the Clubhouse for lunch this
afternoon, and he was out front pointing out how the rain had changed. He was
describing how it began as a light drizzle, and then kept getting stronger over
time. He insisted that before long, it would turn into such a strong downpour
that it would be difficult to see well enough to drive through it. Once that
happens, the whole area will be flooded because the drains won’t be able to
handle that much water on the streets.”
“So, we’ll all end up trapped in our houses? Roger, he is
right that the rain is getting steadily stronger, If it becomes bad here, we’ll
just get in the car and go into the city. According to the weather channel,
it’s not even raining there.”
“I wouldn’t worry about it, Louise. You know how it gets
around here once Spring arrives. Don’t get caught up in Hudson’s delusions. Let’s
watch the news and then get some sleep.”
***
Over the next few weeks, the rainfall did become
stronger. Yards were flooded, and the
drains in the streets were backing up. Water on the sidewalks and streets in
the entire subdivision was flowing like rivers. One Saturday morning, all residents
were notified by the Homeowners’ Association that there would be a meeting at
the Clubhouse regarding the weather. A representative had hand-delivered the
meeting notices to all since telephone service had become sporadic. The rep had
walked to each of the community’s homes since driving on the flooded streets
had become too dangerous.
“Thank you all for coming.” Sandra Peterson was President of
the Association, and she wondered how many of their residents already knew of the
dire situation they were in. “I know it was difficult for some of you, having
to walk so far through all this water, but I feel this meeting is important. The
rainstorm we are currently experiencing is like nothing we have seen before,
but we want to assure you that we are doing everything we can to keep everyone
safe and resolve the difficulties at hand.”
“It’s the end of the world. I told you that, but nobody believed
me. I told you the rain would keep coming down hard…”
“Mr. Hudson, you need to stop saying that right now, or you’ll
be removed from the premises,” Sandra Peterson cautioned. “I’ll not have you,,,”
“I have the right to be here same as anybody,” Hudson
insisted. “But you all know what I’ve said has come true. The end is coming.”
“Maybe he’s right,” Suzanne Miller said. “This morning, I
tried to call my mom in Phoenix, but our phone’s out. Our car won’t start, and
the lights are flickering off and on. What’s going on? We can’t reach anyone
outside the area and we can’t leave. We can’t even walk out of the neighborhood
because the flooding is much worse as you get toward the highway. Plus, the
rain keeps coming down harder, and it’s getting impossible to even see where
you’re going. Have you even tried to contact anyone in the city?”
People began firing questions at the Association’s
President, but she had no answers to any of them. The group was angry, and
Sandra wasn’t sure how to keep them under control.
“We pay you every month to keep things right. Is someone coming
to get us out of here?”
“Don’t you have a radio to use if the phones go out?”
“TV reception is fading, and it’s raining harder with every
hour. Maybe this is the end.”
“Ladies and Gentlemen, please remain calm. Help is on the…”
“I don’t believe you. I’m getting out. Who’s with me? Rog…”
“Calm down, Mitch. We need to wait for...”
“Since when are you in charge?”
“Tom, I’m not saying I’m in charge. It’s just that…hey,
watch who you’re shoving.”
“Don’t tell me what to do. If I want to shove you, I’ll…”
“Please, people, we…”
“Somebody shut that Peterson bitch up. Let’s check out her house.
I’ll bet her phone and lights are working. Come on and…”
“Stop all this. We…”
“Get your hands off me. Lock him up in the…”
“Come on, Mavis. We’re going home. I’ve got a gun so…”
“I’ve got one too, and nobody better…”
***
“That didn’t take long.”
“It never does. You disrupt their miserable little lives and
they turn on each other.”
“It’s only rain and small glitches in their power, yet still they panic.”
“Yes, but create a situation like they’ve never experienced
and they get confused. It’s a small leap from confused to dangerous.”
“It works better with small groups though. They’ll kill each
other off in no time. Larger groups tend to band together in a crisis.”
“That’s true, but patience, my friend. Soon, this place and
all its resources will be ours. Should we change its name like we’ve done with all
the others?”
“Definitely. I never cared for this one’s name anyway –
Earth.”
Every neighbourhood needs a nutter - they had Hudson. I wonder if he was triggered by the aliens or was just an added bonus for them. We've all been annoyed by endless days of rain, but I like the way your dialogue escalated this. Pushing people to the edge is what we see now from those seeking to manipulate elections too - they just want extremists to flourish on both side, to discourage any cooperation or happiness.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments, Mike. I tried to show how quickly things can get out of hand. I agree with you. Every neighborhood, or even a very small town, has a kook that stirs things up now and then. If some type of crisis occurs though, they're worse, and at times, they end up dividing the folks in the area into separate groups. This can be dangerous because in a crisis, folks need to work together to get through it. I also agree with you with regard to political situations. Some politicians don't discourage extremists - they plant them at times, to deliberately get, and keep, things chaotic. Then, they profess to be the only ones who can offer peaceful resolution. It's a nasty tactic, and unfortunately it works.
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